IWSG September 4 Challenge Question: Since it's back to school time, let's talk English class. What's a writing rule you learned in school that messed you up as a writer?
I joined a creative writing class just before retiring because I wanted to work on my first novel, Mothers Don't Die, a dark story about a serial killer. On the very first day of class, our teacher welcomed us with a big smile. "I want you to write about anything at all, whatever inspires your creativity," she said. At last, I thought, I found a good place to nurture my writing. But then she went on to say, "Except violence. I don't want to read anything that is emotionally dark." Oops, I thought. What am I going to write about? Might as well write about mermaids! And so I did.
Those short stories about mermaids led to The Mermaid Quilt & Other Tales. One of those stories morphed into historical fiction, which led to four novels set in 1840s Scotland, Australia, and Canada. And then I became fascinated with art crime after visiting a museum in Paris and seeing those famous lion and unicorn tapestries. This led to The Seventh Tapestry. Which led to another story set in Egypt about a missing sarcophogus (now in draft form and up next).
Because I had a dream about a police woman suspected of murdering her partner and pursued by the police and the bad guys. I'm now maybe one month away from finishing the first rough draft of Unleashed Pursuit. Of course, this story has a dog.
So I don't really have a 'bad' recollection about a writing teacher who messed up my writing. I remember lots of encouragement along the way. If anything, I've learned the importance of having readers who care about my writing, whether they're beta readers working through a rough draft or readers who send me a note after finishing that final published version. We're, after all, a community of writers who care about writing and learning from each other.
Although many rules may apply (especially grammar), for me the most important rule is simply to follow your own creative insight. Surprise yourself. Be willing to try something new . . . or different. All those rules about plot structure or grammar (even capitalization) may come in handy as guidelines and lead you to unexpected discoveries. Yes, keep reading about the writing process. You just might learn something that will help you achieve your own writing goals! And, most of all, keep writing!
To say THANK YOU, since you have read so far, click here to go to Book Funnel to pick up your free copy of my flash fiction SNAPSHOT (at no cost and I'm not collecting e-mails). Hope you enjoy.
And, may I recommend Savannah Gilbo's blog? She generously posts writing tips that have always led me to rethink drafting, writing, and revision.
Happy September . . . Write on!
Congrats on being close to finishing your crime novel. It's cool that your writing instructor's prompt got you writing an unexpected story.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Natalie. Looking forward to your post a little later today!
DeleteI love that you went with your teacher's request and built something totally new out of it. Thank you for hosting IWSG today.
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you for stopping by!
DeleteThat class led you on quite the writing adventure, didn't it?
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Thank you, Alex. IWSG is an amazing writing community. Thank you!
DeleteCongrats on being so close to finishing your crime novel. I love unexpected writing adventures from classes/prompts. I had some interesting short stories spring from my Creative Writing class days back in the day as well. I guess we never know what inspiration will bring. I'm a fellow historical fiction author btw. 1840s Scotland and Australia and Canada are periods I'm not as familiar with, I'll definitely have to check out your work. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteHope you downloaded my freebie . . . some of the stories are dark but many did spring from writing prompts. And I'm going to check out your historical fiction too! Just found your THE GIRL IN THE TRIANGLE. Wow! One of the stories in SNAPSHOT is about that very same historical event: "Fire Sisters." Looking forward to reading this.
DeleteI'm glad you were able to pivot when she told you what to avoid. I don't do very well writing to other people's specifications.
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Hello, Loni. Your comment made me smile. Actually, the greatest motivator for me is when someone says, "I don't think you can do that!" Write on!
DeleteHi, I like your rule. Follow your own creative insight. Thank you for co-hosting. Have a lovely day.
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Hello again, Pat. So good to see you again and thank you for stopping by. Can't wait to read your take on today's question.
DeleteCreative insight. What a great way to name such an important writing tool that adds depth and encourages page turning.
ReplyDeleteThanks for co-hosting, Beth. I like that you took what could have been an uncomfortable situation and made it work.
ReplyDeleteThat was quite a switch from murder to mermaids, but you did it, and it turned out well! Thanks for co-hosting today. Great job.
ReplyDeleteSo glad you were not stumped when your teacher eliminated your choice of genre. You turned lemons into lemonade as you went on to a successful writing career. (Pardon the cliche). Thanks for co-hosting!
ReplyDeleteYour novel sounds interesting. Best of luck, and thanks for co-hosting!
ReplyDeleteSounds like success and inspiration from the parameters that your teacher set. Well done. And, you were still free to write what your heart was telling you to create. Thanks for co-hosting IWSG this month! Mary at Play off the Page.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that your writing class took you in unexpected but positive places. I would have balked at the instructor telling me not to write what I was planning and probably walked out. :-)
ReplyDeleteSuch a wonderful experience at the beginning of your writing career. I chose to write murder mysteries as my "retirement hobby" and wonder what direction I might have taken with the advice of your teacher.
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DeleteThanks for co-hosting, Ms. Mermaid Writer. Wishing you success forever!
ReplyDeleteSuch an exciting adventure you've had in writing! I love your most important rule - and this post in general! I've enjoyed word ;-) Thank you for co-hosting!
ReplyDeleteThe best thing a writing teacher or book coach can do is to encourage you to get your story onto the page. Although...I would have trouble reading a dark or violent story as well. Sorry, Beth! Thanks for cohosting this month!
ReplyDeleteWow, Beth. You've really taken inspiration from around your world. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of following your creative inspiration!
ReplyDeleteDon't write anything violent? Oh my. I don't know as I could have made that pivot. Good for you for making it work and going on to use those stories!
ReplyDeleteI don't think I would be able to write totally without violence. I don't do 'dark', but I write speculative fiction. Usually, there is some violence in any speculative fiction story. Swords, dragons, space pirates, you know...
ReplyDeleteOoh, that's a good thing to remember, that not all stories will be for everyone. I'm glad the class didn't discourage you! <3
ReplyDeleteOh, that was an amazing story about your creative writing class. Teachers really can make a difference, even if we don't know it at the time. Thanks for co-hosting!
ReplyDeleteOne of the reasons I've never seriously considered taking a creative writing class is that I write fairly dark genre fiction (crime fiction and horror, mostly), and most instructors don't allow that. I'm glad you were able to find a way around that limitation.
ReplyDeleteThanks to you and the others for co-hosting!
ReplyDeleteI think if it were me in that class, I. would have dropped it, since I nearly breathe dark and horror fiction. Although I can write light anymore optimistic science fiction or adventure if I wanted, I guess if it were just for the class and I really needed to take it. However, as you showed with your experience, sometimes unfavourable situations can lead to new paths in our writing.
Looks like you were made to write. Lucky you. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks for co-hosting this month. I, too, had good luck in creative writing classes overall--though they definitely had a bias for literary rather than speculative fiction. @samanthabwriter from
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Thanks for co-hosting this month!
ReplyDelete"I want you to write about anything at all, whatever inspires your creativity." At last was right. How did you get so lucky to meet a teacher who would say that? Must’ve been in the right place at the right time.