tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17244908.post7056793556290650796..comments2024-03-21T11:29:49.702-07:00Comments on Beth Camp : Go down revising . . . Beth Camphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12682622561621269515noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17244908.post-67197011279686286812013-12-11T13:07:43.290-08:002013-12-11T13:07:43.290-08:00This is a lot better, Beth, a lot more concrete, m...This is a lot better, Beth, a lot more concrete, making the logistics easier to follow. Good work! <br />Ruth Nestvoldhttp://ruthnestvold.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17244908.post-39445633829548206782013-12-09T17:08:08.874-08:002013-12-09T17:08:08.874-08:00Wow, Beth! This was very informative. I love how o...Wow, Beth! This was very informative. I love how other writers chimed in and gave you tips and feedback. Now, you've shared it with us, and we can keep it going. I know several writers in my critique group who could benefit from this post. <br /><br />As for your fight scene, I hadn't read the original, but I was swinging with Dougal and the rest of the good guys in this version! <br /><Annis Cassellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04956658096326753578noreply@blogger.com