tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17244908.post6950272774242248263..comments2024-03-21T11:29:49.702-07:00Comments on Beth Camp : #7 I See My AuntBeth Camphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12682622561621269515noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17244908.post-69823399636472427032008-04-09T22:36:00.000-07:002008-04-09T22:36:00.000-07:00I really like this! Like above, the beginning catc...I really like this! Like above, the beginning catches reader's attention; the last lines are very strong as well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17244908.post-68082813258145668122008-04-09T03:59:00.000-07:002008-04-09T03:59:00.000-07:00Yes, they were quite a generation - the aunt I've ...Yes, they were quite a generation - the aunt I've written about also survived WWII. I agree that the opening with the 'startling Swedish blue, sometimes ice' is very good - so concrete - it brings her immediately to life.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17244908.post-77352785888587052212008-04-07T22:16:00.000-07:002008-04-07T22:16:00.000-07:00Yes! You also painted with bold and compelling str...Yes! You also painted with bold and compelling strokes.<BR/><BR/>A lady I would have liked to have known.Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17244908.post-30296459529730782872008-04-07T22:15:00.000-07:002008-04-07T22:15:00.000-07:00Very, very good poem. It brings your aunt to vivi...Very, very good poem. It brings your aunt to vivid life.Granny Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18214748856516412924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17244908.post-80495361698602850582008-04-07T19:15:00.000-07:002008-04-07T19:15:00.000-07:00Thank you for reading and commenting, Rebecca. I ...Thank you for reading and commenting, Rebecca. I found this poem difficult to write though it helped me reflect on the relationship. I appreciate your affirming note. BethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17244908.post-30857267119522203822008-04-07T17:21:00.000-07:002008-04-07T17:21:00.000-07:00she sounds like she was a very interesting woman.....she sounds like she was a very interesting woman...i loved the beginning of this poem "i see my aunt in your eyes.." that first line captured me and held me until the last perfect end. nicely done....rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18248554235709475320noreply@blogger.com